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Old 11-06-2012, 03:22 PM
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Re: The longest wait of my life

Indeed, this can be made into a porn movie! so much suspense and action
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Old 12-06-2012, 01:18 AM
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Re: The longest wait of my life

bro,

the longest wait of my life is the continue of the story.
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Old 12-06-2012, 10:46 AM
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My head was peppered with droplets of sweat as i pushed open the door into the hotel.

As i got into the room, i saw Karen somehow manage to work herself free of the bonds and she is now on her stomach playing games on her iphone.

She hardly acknowledged my presence as i tried to catch my breath.

Gary : Hey , how did you get free ?

Karen just shrugged her shoulders and continued tapping away on her phone.
I hid the bottle of pre seed below the bed and out of Karen's sight as i pretended to bend down to take off my shoes.

I did not want Karen to see the brand of lubricant i bought, so i kneeled on the floor as my hand opened up the packaged.

Pushing all the packaging and the applicator under the bed, i left the tube within accessible reach.


I gently took away Karen's phone and looked into her eyes, they were a little swollen and puffy, probably cried a little but who cares.

I lifted her chin and gave her a kiss. Her tongue slithered into mine and i tasted her saliva and sucked on her tongue with fevour.

After a few minutes of kissing, i motioned for her to turn around and face me with her private, i told her i want to taste her again.

Karen hestitated a little before turning onto her back and rotating herself towards me. The smell of stale sweat from her morning workout and the tight confines of her vagina is overpowering. It arouses me and heighten my senses to a point i felt like peeing out of sheer excitement.

I nudeged my nose close slowly, trying to work out in my mind how much can i smell with the varying distance. The temptation of pressing my nose onto her privates directly is too great.

The damp shorts and her underwear acts as a barrier or a filter of sort, preventing the full aroma of her love hole from hitting me. Nudging my way slowly to the side, my tongue parted her shorts and undies and i tasted the dry skin of Karen.

She was not aroused at all.

There wasn't a hint of moisture expect for what appears to be damp sweat patches on her panty.

I pulled Karen closer letting both her feet rest on my shoulders, kissing her inner thighs, i imagined a grid like pattern being projected on her as i covered every square of her thigh.

I reached for the tube of lubricant and squeezed a generous portion onto my palm. Scraping it upwards to fill the middle 3 fingers, i went under her shorts and panty, pressing the cold gel onto Karen's clitoris. The cool sensation caused her to gasp before calming down. I massaged my way slowly downwards, edging the gel into her love hole slowly , bit by bit.

I felt her vagina start to relax a little as i removed my hand and squeeze another generous portion onto my middle and index finger.

Lifting aside her shorts and undies, i massaged the second batch of cold gel directly onto her love hole, moving is a circular motion, working my way deeper into her.

I could feel Karen's breathing hasten as her body arched a little upwards before settling down.

Letting the shorts cover her well lubricated vagina, i massaged her through her sweat soaked shorts.

Another loud exhale of breath told me i'm on the right track.

my hands went to the top of her shorts and i pulled them away, removing both her panty at the same time.

I lifted up Karen's top and she raised her head to allow me to work it off her.

Karen removed her sports bra and put it aside.

Stripping myself, i set free my erected manhood, hoveing near Karen's private.


I lowered myself and suckled on her nipple like a baby, carassing her lve pillows at the same time.

I could not derive satisfaction from her breast alone but i resisted plunging straight in. i've waited so long after all.

Adjusting her position into the centre of the bed, i felt like a king as i towered over her naked body. Karen's eye avoided my gaze as her hand reacched behind her head and disappeared underneath the mountain of pillows as a sign of submission.

I parted her legs and lifted them up to my shoulders.

I hovered my manhood near the entrance of her vagina and i could also feel a wave of warmth radiating from her love hole, tempting me to go in.

The head of my dick first felt the cold gel of her well lubricated vagina lips as it took a peek into the darkness.

I felt so lucky and contended that i get to have to vagina on this beautiful saturday. First the well lubed up and warmth of my wife and now, the beautiful and untouchable former classmate of mine.

There are no words available in my limited vocabulary to describe the feeling of going into the most private region of another man's wife. The sacred vows she took to be faithful to her husband shattered by my flesh as i inched deeper into her.

I felt the cold of the lubricant on my pelvis as i hit the hilt of my penis.

Karen's eyes were closed and her head tilted sideways as i withdrew and entered her again.

I worked myself up to a steady rythem and i regretted almost immediately that i came in my wife that morning.

I might have gone a little overboard on the lub when i realised that the little friction and pressure i got is not enough for satisfy me. Who doesn;t like a tight hole ?


I plunged in and i thrusted harder as i let go of Karen's legs and i lowered myself to kiss her but for some reason she turned away.

Not letting that bother me a bit, i smack my flesh onto hers, filling the room with echos of our body.

Karen's mouth was opened and her eyebrows were cast in a frown as she took in short breathes of air. Did she look like this when she was having sex with Pete ?


I turned her to her sides as i straddle her right leg and let her rest her left over my my right hip. I like this position as it limits my partner's movement. I must have hit a soft spot as i heard the first moan escaped from Karen.

Her hands clenched into fists around the pillow as she brought the goosedown pillow to her face while i pummeled her with my meat spear.

The tightening sensation of my testicles came without warning as i tried to control my orgasm.

I took a deep breath to calm myself down and stopped all movement.

It was at this moment when Karen said her first word.

Karen : Gary, need condoms.

The small pack of 3 was still in my pants pocket as i seperated it from the lub.

I nodded and replied.

Gary : Don;t worry, i'm still far off. i promise to put it on when i come ?

I gave her a reassuring smile as i carassed her cheek. I started gyrating my hips again as her eye closed.

If only she knew i'm on the verge of cumming.

The familiar tightening gripped my manhood again as i felt my orgasm cumming.

I did not want to let karen know that i'm reaching my climax so i sacfificed the fufilment of the deep hard thrust and the grunts that i like and instead i let the sensation take over slowly as i controlled my movement.


The tip of my dickhead contracted as i felt the rush of my sperms to the firing chamber. I let a gentle movement of my hips take over as i bit down hard on my teeth and tried my best to stop my body from shaking.

I let go when my dick is inserted to the hilt.

The perverted thought of me letting go to an unsatisfying orgasm inside Karen compensated me well as i kept up a steady movement.

I smiled whenever i saw the fluttering eyelids of Karen opened up.

Gary :I'm still far away. don;t worry.

My words reasured Karen as she buried herself into the pillow again.

I changed position back to missionary and i tried to prevent myself from going limp. I imagined every thrust pushing my sperm closer to her womb.


I withdrew myself and laied down beside Karen.

Taking her into my arms, i spread her legs with my as i reached for her swollen clit.


Her gasps of air hasten as i massaged her exposed region.

Within minutes Karen;s fist tighten around the pillow as her moans of orgasm erupted as her twitching body shook the bed.

I felt a gush of liquid left her vagina, a mixture of the lubricant and my semen perhaps.

Cupping my hands around them, i tried to massaged them back inside Karen but the ticklish and sensitive sensation is too much for her as she pushed me away.

I let Karen catch her breath on the bed as i got off and back to my kneeling position.

I pulled her close and rested her legs on my shoulders again. Taking the opportunity to observe her gaping and twitching vagina, i saw semen leaking freely from her love hole with each contraction.

I reached beneath for the lub and squeezed anther portion, coating it around my manhood.

I'm ready to go again.
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Old 12-06-2012, 11:27 AM
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Re: The longest wait of my life

Wow TS! What an input on a Tuesday morning! You made me had such hard-on in office that I'm so embarrassed to stand up & go to toilet; everyone's gonna notice the bulge in my pants! Well done! Can't wait for Karen to break the news to Gary that Pete's been fucking his wife! Haha! As mentioned by other bros, please don't let us have the longest wait of our lives for the next segment!
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Creampie ... hmmmmmmm ... bad Gary !
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Re: The longest wait of my life

Lifting myself up from my knees , i let Karen's legs dangle off the bed as i eased myself into her, determined to pushed back as much of my semen as i can.

Slamming my pelvis onto hers, our pubic hair mingled and i coaxed out moans and a mix of uncomfortable groans from Karen. Her private must still be feeling sensitive as i grind myself against her.

Trying to sit up, Karen struggled for a while but i pushed her back down gently, i did not want her to look at her privates that is being violated by my manhood.

I cupped both my hands onto her wrist and i closed my eyes. I pictured her in agony and i converted her moans into screams in my head, the thought of me forcing myself onto her inflated my dick to a bursting point.

I gasped for air from my mouth as my nose can no longer handle the oxygen i needed to keep up the motion.

My pumping action send Karen pulling and grasping on the bedsheet as her abused and cum leaking vagina struggle with the onslaught of my penis.

Karen : Gary , wear a condom... please..

I realised i must have been pumping her too fast and i slowed down immediately, the familiar feeling of orgasm is creeping up my spine again.

Gary : Sorry, am i hurting you ? . i'm still far away, i promise to stop when i'm near ok ?

Karen relaxed a little and laid back down as i went back to my gentle rocking motion.

I flipped her onto her stomach and stood her up while her body is bent over on the bed. Holding on to both her hands like reins on a horse, i entered Karen from behind her.

The angled vagina took me in differently and it felt tighter, perhaps she is using more of her muscles to stand up. I felt a sudden weakness in my knees as i held back a tremble.

Drips of lub mixed with some of my semen is dripping down the sides of Karen's thighs with each push i made. I made a mental note to wipe her up before she could deal with it.

As i pushed and enjoyed the satisfiaction from Karen's love hole, i adjusted our position and soon i am ready to cum again.

The feeling wasn't as strong and intense as before, i bit down on my teeth again and i struggled to slow down my movement as i felt a small squirt left my manhood as i ease in and buried myself deep inside Karen .

I must have paused too long as Karen tried to turn and check on me.

Karen : Are you ok ? Are you coming ?

Gary : No, not yet. i couldn;t bear to come. Didn;t want this to end.

I gave her a sweet smile but she ignored me and tried to crawl away after prying one hand away. i held on and in a fluid motion, i lifted up the blanket and wrapped around my back before i rolled to the side while lifting Karen onto me and burying our bodies together beneath the sheets.

Karen's damp hair tickled my face as i manuvered her ontop of me.

I slid into her slippery love hole again and i stayed there motionless , only the pant of Karen's breath by my ears.

I could feel my rapidly deflating dick and i struggled to hold on.

Thrusting upwards , Karen got upright and i saw her love pillows jiggle with each of my upward motion. She pressed down on my chest with the tip of her fingers as she tried to balance herself.

Stray strands of hair were plastered across her face as we rocked the bed in the suite.

I felt drained and exhausted but i didn't want this to end.

Karen : Where's the condoms ? i'll get it.

I declined the offer, saying that i'm still far away.

Karen : I think we should stop Gary...

Gary :Okok, i'll get it.

I turned and laid Karen down on her back as i bent low to kiss her body, salty from the sweat of our lovemaking.


I tore open the packet of condoms and immediately went back to Karen. SHe is still lying down and luckily she did not get up to examine her privates. I could see dried and caked stains from our bodily fluids, the lubricant smeared wildy all over her bottoms.

I had some difficulty capping on as my dick is deflating fast.

I gave it a few strokes to get it up and quickly capped myself.

Karen's eyes did a qucik check to make sure i'm ready before she got up and lowered herself onto me.

That was when i had a shock of my life

She started to move.

Karen moved at a pace which i found it hard to catch up.

She rode me eagerly, slamming herself down onto my pelvis with her privates. I envy Pete instantly for having such an amazing wife.

We kept the same position and barely 10 minutes later, it was my turn to grab on to the bedsheet.

Karen did not let up but instead increased her grinding and i felt the breath being drawn away from my lungs as my mouth opened wide and i grunted and make a few feeble thrust to empty my trickle of sperm into the condom which is snuggly hugged by the walls of her vagina.


I gasped for breath as i laid on my back.

Holding on to the base of the condom, Karen withdrew herself and collasped beside me.

My hand reached for hers but she refused and turned away instead.

We were quiet for a moment before i heard the slightest of snore coming from Karen .

I fell asleep too.




I was awaken when i heard the spray of the shower come on in the bathroom.

I was exhausted.

I saw Karen emerge from the bathroom a while later and she was drying her hair in front of the dressing table.

She cast a look at me before putting on her clothes. Our eyes met as she was tying her shoelaces but her gaze betrayed no emotions.

The look on her face told me this was a one off encounter.

As she finished with the laces of the other shoe, she got up and she took the notepad and wrote something down.

I heard the click of the door when she left. I managed to catch a glimpse of the clock that read 7pm before i drifted off to sleep again.





I woke up at 11pm in a daze, feeling hungry.

Walking over to the dressing table. i saw Karen's message.


" Pete is screwing your wife "



I re-read the message again before it dawned on me who the fool really is.
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Old 12-06-2012, 02:07 PM
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Re: The longest wait of my life

this is wife swap.
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Old 12-06-2012, 02:09 PM
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Pete - May 2012


They say time heal everything.

I tendered my resignation the following monday to Gary who accepted it without a word in september.


I started a new job, i moved house.

Karen and i reconciled when i apologised. It was an uneasy truce as we worked to regain each other's trust.

Our baby will be due next month.

I put the entire thing behind me and i was glad everything was over and things were back to normal.

Normal at least until i saw Sara one day with a baby in her hand at Raffles city.


We said an awkward hi as i eyed the child in her arm.

Still so tiny, but i could have sworn the baby had my smile.
I saw Gary in the distance queuing at the customer service and i bade a equally awkward goodbye.





Gary June 2012


I was staring at the report in my car as i re-read the details again.
I was elated when Sara was pregnent, but my suspicions was confirmed when i found out that the child wasn't mine.


Karen gave birth yesterday and through a few contacts, i found out her delivery suite and paid her a visit.

Standing in the distance, i could see Pete smiling and milling about happy relatives.

I bidded my time and waited till the relatives and Pete disappeared into the lift. Lifting up my cap a little, i approached the delivery suite inside Mt Alvernia.

I was about to enter when i saw the nurse exit with the baby girl in her arms.

I smiled and i left the way i came when i saw the red birthmark she had on her left forearm near the wrist.


As i settled into my car, i brushed aside my sleeve to check the time, nesting beside my rolex is the birthmark carried by all my siblings.




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Thanks for this great story.

How in the world can you come out this wonderful plot and penned it down so fantastically.

Great work of fiction bro..marvellous
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Thanks for the great story Bro! Ending was as what I've suspected ... any chance of Part II? Perhaps Pete & Gary may swop their respective kids? Or better, when the kids grow up, fate makes them fall for each other, thereby reopening their parents' old wound ... Haha!

With your style of writing bro, I'd say you can seriously coin the idea of making this into a Trilogy huh?
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Re: The longest wait of my life

Apologies for the long wait. Was travelling the past few days.
Although not long distance, spending time on the plane is more tiring compared to being in the office.


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Thanks for this great story.

How in the world can you come out this wonderful plot and penned it down so fantastically.

Great work of fiction bro..marvellous
Thank you for the compliment, glad that you like it.

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Thanks for the great story Bro! Ending was as what I've suspected ... any chance of Part II? Perhaps Pete & Gary may swop their respective kids? Or better, when the kids grow up, fate makes them fall for each other, thereby reopening their parents' old wound ... Haha!

With your style of writing bro, I'd say you can seriously coin the idea of making this into a Trilogy huh?
That's a possibility, perhaps not so soon.
Working on something else at the moment. Will start posting once it's more or less firmed up.

Don;t think can do a trilogy haha. Might get too long winded.


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oldchangkee you still stand there sell cully puff for what, go write drama for TVB already lah.

your writing very steady bro.
haha. i wish i was selling the cully puff, can sit back and shake leg, no need to work already.

I don;t think the things i write can play on TV. PG rating won;t approve.

Maybe M18 haha.
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Re: The longest wait of my life

Nice ending!
Keep it up bro...
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Re: The longest wait of my life

Dear TS

Just want to say thank you for such a captivating story. Would greatly buy you a drink for the effort. Cheers
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well ... ending is kinda warped ... but still the over all storyline's been excellent
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Re: The longest wait of my life

Story end too fast Liao.

Hmmm need to make love a few more times. Then new character/couple comes in.
Then make love a few times and then Meet up with old couple.

That way story can be 1-2 years long.

We,readers will have a lot to read.

When is next story??????

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